You’ve got a flow going. The inciting incident is spot on and the pacing is running at a good clip. But that one character?
There is something you like about her otherwise you would have thrown her out a long time ago. But as you read through your manuscript with an objective eye, you notice she might as well be a fly on the wall without eyes. She’s already got a motivation towards her purpose but something’s missing.
Here are a few ideas:
Keep your characters alive!
Here’s a link for more on the topic.